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TG HQ mech

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Ok, ill review it, but to be totally blunt theres a lot about it I dont really like.
Ive been waiting to say anything since it was still being worked on and a lot of it has improved but it still has a lot of issues.


1. The Lower body I do like, it looks good but the Ribbing is too busy. SPecifically the spider web in the middle is too much.

2. The Pin Head. It looks like its gotten its head shrunk by some wild tribe in peru. It should look more like a badass mech head like the other mech and not a pimple.

3. Too much guns sticking out. It looks like GT had too much input on this design and stuck cannon barrels out of it everywhere. Specifically, the Belly button cannon, The small lower body side cannons, and the 3 Penis cannons look out of place and too much.

I suggest changing the Belly button cannon into a flush mounted PAC.
Remove one Penis cannon and put the laser in a different spot. Probably 2 of them on the sides or something instead of in the middle.

4. I dont understand the Jets on the torso and why the torso undocks? It should stay docked and jets arent going to translate momentum into the lower driving body anyway. The ACBs stuck outside of the body look bad also.


So, thats just for how it looks, i didnt even check to see if all the functions were working right since so much of it needs changed.

I do see potential in the design, just gotta cut away a lot and fix some stuff to get there.


So, sorry for so much criticism/ feedback. If you get those worked out I can check its functionality and then id be much more likely to take it. As it is right now, I wont...
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TG HQ mech - by joefish - 2016-09-06, 06:35 AM
RE: TG HQ mech - by bokke1010 - 2016-09-07, 06:13 PM
RE: TG HQ mech - by joefish - 2016-09-08, 01:30 AM
RE: TG HQ mech - by majyst - 2016-09-09, 04:05 AM
RE: TG HQ mech - by joefish - 2016-09-09, 04:00 PM
RE: TG HQ mech - by BaronBaconeer - 2016-10-10, 11:58 PM
RE: TG HQ mech - by joefish - 2016-10-12, 12:25 AM

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